Pat needs beta readers

[BigSexyDaddy123]

I'm an alpha reader, only read porno mags and the ancient Greeks. Sorry fatso

 

[Torque’sHeadBump]

Very, very disturbing response from Pat’s good friend on his Facebook repost of this horseshit!

 

[Patrick O'Neal]

 

[CompoundBasement]

 

[Rudderman]

He doesn't actually want anyone to critique his masterpiece. This is just the latest version of his bragging about arbitrary pagecount milestones.

To put it in terms that Pig himself could understand: You could wear the ghost of Charles Dickens in a backpack like Yoda teaching Luke Skywalker to use the force, and we all know that you would never take any notes or make the slightest revisions to your hastily fired-off first draft, you noncreative workshy turd.

 

[Torque’sHeadBump]

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Sir, don’t do that

 

[IGotATreeOnMyHouse85]

I figured it out

The killer is…

Deon Tusk

 

[CruisinColin]

This is pathetic. Even for Pat.

 

[Jims_Maroon_Pants]

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I sure hope some Bong pests don't request to join

 

[Jims_Maroon_Pants]

"More serious and socially conscious." So even worse than you could possibly imagine.

That means there are fags and trannies in it
Oh and tons and tons of hero blacks

 

[Cumtown Fags]

How important is the publisher?

 

[DeadWithoutMyDavid]

Oh they'll be betas alright

 

[MySecondFatterAccount]

Imagine Pat taking criticism well. He will scoff at every bit of advice unless its from some rainbow haired tranny.

He retweeted it this morning. Looks like this request is setting twitter on fire with takers.

 

[NigelCumia]

According to Danny Ross we're all British YouTube listeners so this shouldn't be a problem.

 

[NigelCumia]

It sounds like a trap!

They've destroyed my future earnings!! That was a 100k book! Lawsuit stlaker!!!

 

[NigelCumia]

If your British than obviously you'd be down with the hip lingo of 1863, this should be easy to find for a retarded book at will move 74 copies.

 

[IGotATreeOnMyHouse85]

Pats a real British cigarette if you ask me

 

[IGotATreeOnMyHouse85]

He got all that attention for his “viral” tweet then this just gets next to nothing

 

[Ants Hard Drive of Horror]

Pat on beta readers
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I had to make my chatacter gay. Even though that changes nothing and he's still a great guy in every way.

I'm starting to think Tiny Tim will come out as a tranny.

 

[IGotATreeOnMyHouse85]

I had to make my chatacter gay. Even though that changes nothing and he's still a great guy in every way.

I'm starting to think Tiny Tim will come out as a tranny.

He will have tranny characters to push the lie that “Trans people have been around forever!”