Critique Some Art

[The REAL JDA]

What do you think?

 

[guest]

Far too slim for Pat. E. Fonda.

 

[CarolMaxheinie]

Pretty good effort. He waddles like a sumo wrestler. Did you know he cheated at the 2016 Brewers Mini Marathon by cutting the course in two places and still finished with an appalling time of around 2:40?

You should work that into the plot of one of your books. I’d buy a crate of them.

 

[Joe_Cumia_Eats_HUMAN_SHIT]

Add a HSA layer for your Fatrick layer and do better with the skin tone, child.

Also how many light sources do you think their are, child? I'm sorry you're so stupid.

 

[guest]

The sumo body isnt pink/yellow enough to match Fatrick's jaundiced complexion.

 

[TheDarkFezRises]

Far too slim for Pat. E. Fonda.

P. Conda (government).

 

[NoBacon]

PATRICK MURDERED BERNELL TREMMEL AND I’M NOT GOING TO PRETEND HE DIDN’T ANYMORE!

HE IS A FUCKING MURDERER!

 

[Bin_The_Blacks]

 

[Gay Faggot.]

I think he should be facing a small African American child. It would be an accurate sketch of one of the first steps to making “niggeroni” as he calls it.

 

[DrSteveCarlisi]

Add a HSA layer for your Fatrick layer and do better with the skin tone, child.

Also how many light sources do you think their are, child? I'm sorry you're so stupid.

Do tell. What's an HSA layer? (I googled before asking.)

I might like to do a pig themed Photoshop myself some day.

 

[Slackjawed Cow]

Bulkozuna

 

[Stetten's Long Thumbers]

Yokotuna

 

[Meownaw]

Not humiliating enough

 

[💩💩💩💩]

needs more cocks and piss in his mouth

 

['THE NIGGER MAN']

needs the marathon cheating face and this body. Pat has zero muscle tone.

 

[AntsBatteryCharge]

Old one

 

[TorqueWheeler]

 

[Snake]

 

[guest]

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Ha! Gold star to you sir!

When not lusting after children Uncle Paul fucks fatty Patties.

 

[AntsBatteryCharge]