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All Apologies (To RobertMewler)

Riccardo Bosi

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It's not good writing. NONE OF IT MAKES SENSE. I can't comprehend any of the sentences you're reading. There is something seriously mentally wrong with Pat. It's like you're reading something from a Google translate or some shit.
It's disjointed, clunky, and the sentences are way too long. He's never heard the phrase "short and sweet". "Considering his considerably..." - just amateurish.
 
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It's disjointed, clunky, and the sentences are way too long. He's never heard the phrase "short and sweet". "Considering his considerably..." - just amateurish.
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And HE gets to be an author?! What a joke!

Oh wait, he has no publisher anymore. And he never will again. Tee hee.
 
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