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@AntSucks seems to be reading Gate Crashers right now, so I think it's a good time to re-visit these errors in the book. First, there is a character named "Jacqueline". She is also called "Jackie". However, twice in the book, she is called "Jaqueline" (without the c), including once on this same page as the correct spelling:
Later in the book, Pat's found family is going to some big political building. They need Jackie to drive them there:
As we can see, Jackie has 5 passengers. Four of them (Maximus, Harris, Felix, and D'armic) get out and proceed into the building. Allison then follows, but not before telling Jackie to "keep the engines warm". Basically, Jackie is supposed to wait in the cab and be ready so they can make a hasty getaway later.
But wait, a couple of pages later:
Uhh, so Jackie is now with "everyone" and is standing "in awe of the doors". Isn't she supposed to be back at the cab, keeping the engines warm?
A few pages later, the characters haul ass outta there, and who should be waiting back at the cab? Jackie!
I guess she didn't go inside and stand in awe of the doors? Why does she ask "where are the others" when she was just with them standing in awe of the doors? Was she in the "waiting shuttle" the whole time? This doesn't make a lick of sense!
Pat: you're fat, your books have remedial errors because your editor is a retard, and you're ugly to boot.
Later in the book, Pat's found family is going to some big political building. They need Jackie to drive them there:
As we can see, Jackie has 5 passengers. Four of them (Maximus, Harris, Felix, and D'armic) get out and proceed into the building. Allison then follows, but not before telling Jackie to "keep the engines warm". Basically, Jackie is supposed to wait in the cab and be ready so they can make a hasty getaway later.
But wait, a couple of pages later:
Uhh, so Jackie is now with "everyone" and is standing "in awe of the doors". Isn't she supposed to be back at the cab, keeping the engines warm?
A few pages later, the characters haul ass outta there, and who should be waiting back at the cab? Jackie!
I guess she didn't go inside and stand in awe of the doors? Why does she ask "where are the others" when she was just with them standing in awe of the doors? Was she in the "waiting shuttle" the whole time? This doesn't make a lick of sense!
Pat: you're fat, your books have remedial errors because your editor is a retard, and you're ugly to boot.
