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Lamont & Tonelli

Brevity is... wit.
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The anger progression needs more levels to be believable, and the faux calm start comes across very forced. Try it again, this time start from a more genuinely calm place and let the paranoia and rage build to a climax. Both you and the audience (this includes secret agents) will appreciate the nuances.
 
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