Fucking dreck.

[RoTheHo69]

DAKOR’S DILEMMA • by Patrick S. Tomlinson

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Adrienne Says:
January 4th, 2011 at 4:49 pm
I enjoyed this story and hope to see more in this world to expand on what you’ve shown us here.


Damn Adrienne supported this garbage? No wonder you didn't want her to leave. What kind of shitty gay servant wouldn't know whether their master preferred coffee or tea and what kind of gay faggot gets 3 sugars in their coffee. Fucking stinks.

Dakor?

 

[Meownaw]

If she supported him like this what the fuck did he do in return? Besides introducing her to PCJ.

 

[O-BLOCK NIGGA!]

We're not here to attack her taste in art; we're here to defend her from a delusional narcissist.

This bitch probably finds The (American) Office funny. So? She still rocks.

 

[BudDickman]

DAKOR’S DILEMMA • by Patrick S. Tomlinson

Every Day Fiction is a magazine that specializes in bringing you fine fiction in bite-size doses. Every day, we publish a new short story of 1000 words or fewer that can be read during your lunch hour, on transit, or even over breakfast.

web.archive.org

Adrienne Says:
January 4th, 2011 at 4:49 pm
I enjoyed this story and hope to see more in this world to expand on what you’ve shown us here.


Damn Adrienne supported this garbage? No wonder you didn't want her to leave. What kind of shitty gay servant wouldn't know whether their master preferred coffee or tea and what kind of gay faggot gets 3 sugars in their coffee. Fucking stinks.

Dakor?

The bacon, toast, and hard boiled eggs annoyed me. Sounds like a Tomlinson charcuterie board as opposed to an actual meal. When they ask you at a breakfast place "how would you like your eggs?", hard boiled is not an option. It's the sort of thing a child would ask for because they think eggs are icky.

 

[SmellenShoehorn]

Fatso probably posted the comment in her name

 

[Easily_Remembered]

This must have been prior to the brain injury. Patrick was in the comments fielding the criticisms before addressing them, and he actually wasn't a giant dick about it.

 

[fusciasomething]

Fatso probably posted the comment in her name

Just like his linebacker wife liking all of his tweets even though she never uses twitter.

 

[guest]

Just like his linebacker wife liking all of his tweets even though she never uses twitter.

Exactly. He loves pretending to be his significant other when "liking" his material.

He's mentally ill.

 

[42069]

Not a good story

 

[BudDickman]

Fatso probably posted the comment in her name

Naw, that was his captive wife being unnaturally supportive. You can tell she didn't even give a shit about the story and gave some vague praise of the story that anyone can give ("nice story, I like the setting... can you get a job already?"). Later on, Pat does seem to comment as his Mustang Suzanne (you have to look at the actual site rather than the archived version):

Well I really liked this; helms and townspeople notwithstanding. Neither was an issue for me; the story had internal integrity and the chilling abuse of one human by another for such an ultimately pointless purpose is a gross reminder of just what we have done to people who are 'different' at all sorts of stages in our development. Good yarn, well told.

Totally reads like a Pat comment. Brushes off criticism about word usage, pick out themes that were nowhere to be found in the actual story due Pat's lack of writing talent (which has not changed), and finishes it off with a couple of Pat-like sentence fragments praising his own writing abilities.

 

[Stetten's Long Thumbers]

Every character he writes is himself. We can gain so much insight by reading his stories, but we'd all kill ourselves by the end. Catch-22

 

[Stetten's Long Thumbers]

Naw, that was his captive wife being unnaturally supportive. You can tell she didn't even give a shit about the story and gave some vague praise of the story that anyone can give ("nice story, I like the setting... can you get a job already?"). Later on, Pat does seem to comment as his Mustang Suzanne (you have to look at the actual site rather than the archived version):

Totally reads like a Pat comment. Brushes off criticism about word usage, pick out themes that were nowhere to be found in the actual story due Pat's lack of writing talent (which has not changed), and finishes it off with a couple of Pat-like sentence fragments praising his own writing abilities.

Nice overuse of semicolons. This must have been before he discovered commas

 

[guest]

Nice overuse of semicolons. This must have been before he discovered commas

Hush, child; my semicolon, and comma usage, is totally logical, to everyone.

 

[EraGodless]

This must have been prior to the brain injury. Patrick was in the comments fielding the criticisms before addressing them, and he actually wasn't a giant dick about it.

The Lappening was the traumatic brain injury-- coupled with the alcoholism and dogshit diet.