Flying Sparks 1-4: Play No games Cover Criticism

[Mc.Faggot]

Why did you use this shitty artwork as the cover? @The REAL JDA

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You obviously had a talented artist you could have paid for a cover, look at this one

I notice you are charging $35 bucks for the sexy cover and $25 dollars for the dogshit cover that looks stupid

Aren't you supposed to be a Christian or some shit?

Why are you being flesh merchant for 10 extra bucks to your christian fans?

Also why not hire the pornographer who drew your variant cover to draw the first cover?

I just started digging here @The REAL JDA and already I don't like what I'm finding

What do you have to say for yourself buster?

 

[Snake]

You obviously had a talented artist you could have paid for a cover, look at this one

 

[Snake]

Dude, you don’t get enough attention?

Fuck are you talking about? I can't point out it's a shitty artist? There's towsends of people better than me, and this is not one of them.

 

[guest]

The tits are so wonky in the first one...almost like tit Pecs

 

[Snake]

The tits are so wonky in the first one...almost like tit Pecs

No, child. Boobs should look like they're always in zero gravity with zero droop. Backbones are supposed to be completely straight at all times and there should be no rhythm or flow to the figure. Hush now.

 

[Mc.Faggot]

Fuck are you talking about? I can't point out it's a shitty artist? There's towsends of people better than me, and this is not one of them.

Sorry, I realized you didn't know how much money they had to pay a good artist



They had 13k+ on a 5k Kickstarter goal

And you are better than this dude, look https://www.jamespascoe.net/gallery

I misunderstood your comment, we are still mortal enemies tho

 

[Snake]

And you are better than this dude

Yes. Good color composition used, but everything looks like cardboard with no "energy" when depicting movement.

 

[Mc.Faggot]

Yes. Good color composition used, but everything looks like cardboard with no "energy" when depicting movement.

It's because he doesn't draw women as much as he draws muscular dudes, and even then he just does real hack fucking poses

the variant cover has so much life and energy, and little background details that bring it all together

you know they got that one first, and just did the variant as an afterthought, almost like they made it purposefully shitty to sell the more expensive cover

 

[guest]

How did the Tony Johnny beef even start?

 

[Mc.Faggot]

How did the Tony Johnny beef even start?

Hush sweet summer child

 

[guest]

i forgot the nyeheyeheyeh

 

[Mitch Weaver]

How did the Tony Johnny beef even start?

Vito hates chinks.

 

[Mc.Faggot]

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why are we not relentlessly mocking this faggot?

 

[Mc.Faggot]

wtf is this? @The REAL JDA

this is like conservatives letting in based trannies to pwn the left, this dude is just mexican patrick

 

[Mc.Faggot]

ok, so this dude is twitter addicted like patrick as well, constantly ban evading like Nana

and within the last 11h be posted this

Didn’t Ethan Ralph just plead guilty to posting revenge pornography of his teenage baby mother?

How is that a Great American culture warrior?

I thought you were a christian? and thats what american culture was missing?

how is drunkenly ruining a girls life by posting her most intimate moments online christian?

You are as big a hypocrite as patrick and might be bigger physically too

 

[Mc.Faggot]

More Twitter hypocrisy https://twitter.com/LeadingHispanic

Your Variant cover is just as degenerate you fucking slime

"Oopsie I walked in on you changing, how naughty of me"

you are a fucking creep

 

[Libby Son Of Loin]

Comics are equally as gay as anime

 

[alkiefuck2]

reminder:

@The REAL JDA wanted to be chums with the other pedophiles at SFWA, but even they rejected him!
Sad!

 

[JoshFromMichigan]

Is this the story he wrote about a 15 year old girl? JDA is a degenerate creep like his ex-buddies in SFWA.

 

[Sputnik]

I’m glad people realize this guy is a bum and he stinks.